poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Enigmatic Innocence by Katzclear.

Dovina6 Oct 2005

stoicism is so similar to apathy that the opening lines seem trivial.

Vile existance and survival are not similar, making the next few lines wonderment.

"Steadfast mistaken for diffidence" is a good line.

The last line seems to change the subject.