poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac.

zodiac19 Oct 2005

At that point it rhymed. Maybe.

You're right, I'm only talking about actual tongues dancing around inside of mouths. Feel free to use it, but there's the possibility I'm using it from someone else, I'm not sure. If I am, it's Don Delillo in The Names.

The last part is supposed to be another reason for falling into religion. It's not worded right and I don't know yet how to fix it. Suggestions?