poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Incommunicado blues (fixed, except for Dovina) by zodiac.

<~>20 Oct 2005

suggestion:


I want to tell you I fear
falling into religion--just for a scaffold
of proper nouns, greetings, expansive gestures;
to be as-one with these waiting women--pause,
glance knowingly at a departure lounge
ceiling loudspeaker, and hear.

does that mean what you're looking for?