ALChemy16 Nov 2005

You pretty much explained his comment without even knowing it.

You're saying to yourself, "What's he talking about?" Of course you are.

Let me show you.

cyan9, If you are going to leave poems like this, please save your energy,(. It) it shows quite a degree of disregard and emotional underdevelopement to see it (your poetry) as a dictionary of words rather than to view and experience the sensations of the scene unfolding. As for being formatted by a post-prime Billy Corgan, this means it's (your poem's) of no value or use, and looks like you are trying to sound more intelligent than you are. I appreciate the fact that you are giving by posting your poems (which is one better than most people) but please have a think about what you are giving. This poem has served no use to me, and has caused very mild offense,(.) what was the point?

Don't worry cyan9. You'll still win the argument because like Jason Voorhees you just won't stop hacking away and die already.