zodiac16 Dec 2005

I'm getting from this that perverts ought to have more privacy, but there's no privacy for anybody. Poor perverts.

If you don't think that's what this poem's saying, you might consider (1) punctuating normally and (2) making real sentences (rather than strings of nouns and adjectives) as ways of reducing ambiguity and keeping people from making my mistake. Personally, I think that's an ace thing to write poetry about, and I'm glad to see you taking on more complicated subjects.