poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Train of Thought by Sisterwolf.

INTRANSIT26 Dec 2005

Hmm. Periods, maybe. But without them it reads more like a child. Since it was a childs memory, this is ok by me. Periods would make it seem written more maturely, maybe too intently. Sorry I can't reach both ends of my shoelace this eve.