Sisterwolf28 Dec 2005

I commited the same sin with punctuation - so this advise comes from experience. This is a wad of chewing tobacco that will choke the reader right into leaving.
note - could of/NO - could HAVE/yes
use caps for pronoun I -
proofread for spelling and punctuation, as well as grammar. If you are new to poetry, please do not bristle at critiques - as I have a keen tendency to do.
I assure you my remarks come from an Editor's standpoint and the desire to help young people use
the English language.