lmp30 Dec 2005

well, i creid. i smiled, i nodded with understanding of those emotions. hopefully, i will not ever have to endure the "squeeze". ugh!
as others have said, the reverse works for me. it also leads us in an interesting slow growth to the painful climax, and then a joyous denoument, and then the ominous ending lines...
the impending doom of the garden would itself make an interesting stage for another piece of writing.
sorry for the long comment. and sorry for your loss.