poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Shadow's Stride by D. $ Fontera.

LilMsLadyPoet3 Jan 2006

shred reads as a typo...the single comma....'round...
other than that the images are dark, but don't paint an entire picture well. It attempts to, but doesn't. I'd say keep working on it...make it more clear what is going on. (all the shades in this black room? black says black...no color...)