poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Temporary moments by Prince of Void.

Dovina23 Jan 2006

I like the start of this, but it degrades as it goes on. Let me do a little alchemy:

Deep inside the grieves of moments
On early morning light of dawn
Breaking upon the waves of sea
Deep within the dream of me
The path that led to show
What time can sometimes bring
That led to ruin and
Empty moments flowing over past
Rising, falling dying in me
All this time I had what I couldn't see
Beyond my senses, what I grieve
Was to know why you are gone
All l loved was you
Still you …
All this time what I have done...
Was to draw you back again
Waiting thorough a million tears
This ocean of time can be something
If only to see me now