amanda_dcosta27 Jan 2006

About ne'er...maybe I should have written it ' I'll never forget'. I'll give you that. About the cross/ toss rhyme, I didn't force it. It flowed like that so I decided to keep it. It's for mainly what it means. When one's married, he/she knows what its like to be angry and cross, and see their marriage go for a sixer - a toss, and its hard to keep focus on what's actually brought both together. And about 'morrow - I liked it when I fitted it in, so I kept it.

I'll agree, this piece could be modified like you've pointed out. I'll try doing what I can. Thanks.