poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW.

ALChemy29 Jan 2006

You count the syllables not the words.
In/ hea/ven. I/ just/ hope/ that/
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Zodiac won't go to heaven or hell. He'll just die, as all atheists do. You'll recognise me when you get to heaven. I'll be the one God hired to clean the bathrooms.