poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Penny Loafer Blues by ALChemy.

ALChemy31 Jan 2006

I see. I was trying to describe the images that form while you just lie there eyes closed staring into the inside of your eyelids, how light causes a faint orange-red glow and how like with clouds you start to make images out of them. In this case the face of my future dream wife. Good point though. I've certainly got some editing to do.