Ranger9 Feb 2006

Yes, give and take here, old fruit. You can only get away with not commenting on others' work if your name is -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I.
I'm not sure if this poem is metaphorical or if it's a direct description...if it's the former, you need to make it a little clearer for the benefit of morons like myself; if it's the latter, well then it's nicely written but doesn't really elicit any sort of thought from the reader.