poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Journeyman by Glasseyez.

Ranger14 Feb 2006

'Seen four the seven seas', is that meant to be '...four of the seven seas'? Because if so I think it would work better as '...four of seven seas'. If I'm missing something obvious here, bear with me. I'm tired.
I think the grammar and structure could do with being worked on, but I like the content and images - they could do with being brought out a little more though.