poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Valentine 2 by zodiac.

ALChemy15 Feb 2006

I see what you mean. I've always thought there was a connection between kissing and canabalism. Maybe that could tie it all in for you. Maybe let the narrator give the last lines as questions as if he himself cannot imagine how they can eat their gods.
I think it's just hard to see the history behind the story unless you know about the original story first and so it loses some of it's impact for those who don't know the history.
With a little research I'm sure I'll be able to appreciate the poem alot more.