poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn.

poetandknowit9 Sep 2002

The title overused and makes me start a song in my head before I even start the poem. I like the style; you used it in the other poem, but I have the same feelings. I can see you ticking away, but I do like this one better than the other.