Ranger21 Feb 2006

I think you deleted my comment, if by accident then I don't know if anyone's told you that the red 'x' is the delete button, to reply click 'reply' (this sentence doesn't even remotely make grammatical sense...). If you know that already, disregard this poem. I've just seen a lot of people do it by mistake.
Post some of your other stuff anyway. People here will always give advice - and take it from me that the experience you get from this site will improve your poetry immeasurably. I had to take a 2 and a half year break from writing to get things right and recover from writer's block, all of a sudden things are starting to fall into place.
And if you've written something as good as this, you will write something just as good - if not better - in the future.
Welcome to poemranker!