zodiac21 Feb 2006

Try to avoid reversing normal word order, like in "blessings she bequeaths". And easy way to do that - to, say, get "bequeaths" at the end of the line instead of blessings - is to enjamb. Try:

Around the painting, she bequeaths
blessings, plots colors, running free
By splashes of rain droplets from her eyes
Hues battle for territory