richa27 Feb 2006
The main problem with this poem however is that it attempts to classify the entire human world by using slogans such as 'If Mankindâs soul is ever to find peace this war against itself must surely cease, and man accept his place as just one piece of a far greater whole, this would increase his understanding,'. It would be more productive for you to examine the minutiae of this world view. Use metaphor that kind of thing.