Blue Magpie1 Mar 2006

This is a mixed bag, although easy to relate to,

Try to see the world as I see it through my eyes

This is undoubtedly the worst lne in the poem, You should either say

Try to see the world through me eyes.
or
Try to see the world as I see it.

But given how many people see it similarly you could try

Try and see the world how we see it, etc.