LilMsLadyPoet1 Mar 2006

I wasn't as amused by this as I might have been. Too cheesy in too many places, but then again, alot of people praise cheezy to high heaven. It just didn't go anywhere interesting! I kept thinking you were going to make them lovers...so many places hint you are going there. (Intro>loved the Lord passionatly,how long have you been in love with the Lord? a burning desire to please the Lord, that nothing could prevent me from expressing my love
for Him. the whole dancing nearly-naked part.) I don't think this was an accident...and if you were going that direction, then don't pussy-foot around it...go for the balls, so to speak! And if you find that whole idea blasphemous, then take a really close look at this and revise...alot! (also, if it was not intentional, then perhaps you might want to talk to your priest...unless, of course he is of that type that would agree they were indeed lovers, and you are a pretty youngster.... LOL...Don't send me hate mail!