SupremeDreamer7 Mar 2006

"where thousand of perilous burns,"
--Perilous what? Wheres the fucking noun man?


"to refrain from that fatal burns."
--Trying to sound fancy & sophisticated? 'That' is singular, 'burns' being plural... wouldn't it have been more intelligent to say 'those'? Oh, yes, don't forget that the missing noun in the beginning confuses it all, unless you intended it as a noun there too- which still makes little sense.

"That they are right as a trivet"
--What the fuck? Did you disconnect your brain from your fingers when typing up this shit?


"alas happened to be the dweller of that land."
--Now this is plain cheesy and fucking gay.


I won't bother continuing, other than to add that using 'Envisage' was idiotic, thesaurophilic, & silly.

Your views on Iraq are cliched, and frankly I don't give a shit. Zero.