poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on War on Iraq by Dhanesh M Kumar.

SupremeDreamer7 Mar 2006

Well, you made me envision something worthwhile with that -mother of a soldier- sentence. Add a little substance, character, and its internal thought process, and you'd probably make an Iraq poem worth reading.

Kumar here spewed an vision of confusion, and conveyed a sense of wild verbal 'n grammarical masturbation. Red Biro can't save him, neither can Jesus. He must be Lazurus, let himself die and be ressurected... All through his own pensaber, and what little force he does posses.