Ranger12 Mar 2006

This is cool - 'kinder-coloured plastic', 'gravity's fool', 'crab clawed', 'trick of undoing' etc. are great to read; you always give something new in your poems. I love the contrast of 'superpowered/old engine', it works brilliantly for young yet exhausted muscles.
'Old Doubt'...sounds like an ale... =D

Tell how you prevailed; I'm in the mood for good news!