ecargo30 Mar 2006

Well, let's see--"raspberry girl" yields 500 hits on a Google search of the term, so, yes, probably a little overdone. "white-faced hills" yields no hits, so probably not in common parlance.

Reasonable crit if it weren't so petty and obviously prompted because I didn't cream over your little poeme. That's cool--if you can't take crits I won't bother offering any. Buhbye.