poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Day After Next by cyan9.

drnick5 Apr 2006

I really like this. I'm not sure that many people know what black and white camera film melting is like, so perhaps you would consider a different analogy. I like the "jerked from frame to frame" and "like children crying and the screeching of worn brakes." Very good imagry.