amanda_dcosta6 Apr 2006

Very constructive critisism. Thanks. I agree I should do a lot more proof reading and editing on this. And the " o'er ", maybe I could reword it over.

As for the four continent verse.... it was part of the trying time I had to deal with... part of which was also due to the events mentioned in the verse before this.

On the whole, the whole description of this poem is about my distress and anxiety, one which I am able to handle through faith.