Ranger17 Apr 2006

Was there a reason for capitalising 'Cries' and 'Demons'? It's not a criticism, just that neither are proper nouns, and so don't take capitalisation. Unless, of course, there's a purpose which I missed (entirely plausible).
Great flow. The opening stanza is a gripper.
I think you can get away with using the full 'escapes' (stanza 4, line 3).