lmp18 Apr 2006
yeah, that word i always pronounced "stay-beel", but "stay-bile" is also correct. i had a hard time finding a word rhyming with "while" that was not way out of contect with the rest of the verse.
when i began this form, i thought it would be easier than it is. i guess i am not overly familiar writing tercet verses. and the rhyme scheme actually makes it a bit tricky, but i like it. it really does link the verses nicely.