poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on my girl's day [tri-ku] by lmp.

lmp18 Apr 2006

excellent suggestions, although i cannot [in good conscience] use "watercolor laugh" now that you outrightly suggested it. i will work on that idea of duality some more to tighten it up.
and FIE! those syllables. i *will* correct that blatant oversight.