Sunny24 Apr 2006

Here goes...I had to do some research for this one - I like that though :)
*For your intended three-part "levels" if you will, I find the poem too undefined to really see by MOST readers, some will be on this level however.
*Don't care for your choice in "fayre" in light of "fair," coming from a Plath lover & Shakespeare, well, dis-lover...you get it.
*But more predominently overall...you do not need me to tell you that this is a well thought out piece that definitely stands for a second or third read; it deserves this much anyway.

Very "vintag" poetry (with vintage technique). Very smart.

~Sunny