Sunny24 Apr 2006

Awww, now that it was layed out on a plate for me, thanks Dovina, but I promise I didn't make sure it was broken down before I read, I read first. I picked up on the scene in itself all right...all except the personal issue. I'm sorry, not to be mistaken for pity or such - I see the literary beauty that came out of those sorrows, easier said than gone through I know.

*Clever theme you chose & quite appropriate in time-line sense for this metaphorical statue of a poem, but...
*Not too crazy about the line breaks; I found quite a few to be a bit random & off-guard at times.

Turning a cut stone into a diamond...cheers...

~Sunny