amanda_dcosta27 Apr 2006

Dovina, hi! and thanks for your vote and critique. why "til"? I don't get that part of your sugggestion.

And for the rest of the stuff,"Touch a patch of land that needs you most" , well, as far as sun's rays are needed, all things do, land does and so on. But maybe there's some place that needs to be warmed up urgently, like a cold lonely heart wanting to be warmed up by friendship, perhaps. So there's an essence of wanting a beam of light to filter through the clouds and landing right on target. Bingo, bulls eye! That's the idea behind it.

And as for the last line, it's 'my' on purpose. If nothing else , she might just touch my heart, as she's already begun to.