Ranger3 May 2006

I like the suggestions for the introduction (I wasn't happy with that passage when I posted it). 'Needle' was meant as a description of the leafless branches, I shall adjust that accordingly. I won't give the game away yet as to what/who the tree and the caterpillar represent but the poem certainly is set in biblical narrative. The cliche I wanted in order to make the characters clearer, but I'll change it to something similar. Thanks for your suggestions - as always they're useful to the project.