poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Awasa, Ethiopia by Beatriz Romero by Sunny.

Sunny8 May 2006

Impressive once again Ranger!! The tree: the tree of life (this part is by no means obvious), the sky> "The Oz ceiling/ appeared to be quite encompassed/ with frustrations where the blanketed overcast/ lie flat on its back on the ebony horizon./ Other parts of the sky were showing/ their sheet of mist, with the sun gaping/ through it’s teeth," represents life, good vs. evil. Evil being "frustrations...overcast," "lie flat ON ITS BACK..." I chose this misty representation to lie on its back as a submissive position to the "...parts of the sky were showing...the sun gaping through its (evil's) teeth"> the good. our battle through life (i chose the sky to represent) of the good & the bad.
"She is going to walk on this plain of sorts,...all the way straight into it’s very eternity:/ a procession that might go until the clock..." is ground, whatever your eyes might decipher it as, representing the eternities (aka - heaven, the afterlife, what you will..). You nailed it. Thank goodness someone will, ha ha...

-Sunny