amanda_dcosta15 May 2006

Dovina, I'd rather say that, first of all, most people don't ask for forgiveness, or don't want to admit their wrong and sorry. Doing this is a noble act of courage and love.

Niphredil, this is a lovely poem, and I esp like the third verse...'Struggling against each other; strangling each other,
Till nothing more was left but a dull throbbing void.'

You have quite a few good phrases here. Good work!