Caducus20 May 2006

Love the exodus idea its hard and effective. You may have a point about the sixteen silies, the four tears represent the parents of the murderer and the sixteen smiles the victims parents, however I do have limits on a first draft and you've spent time crafting a thoughtful and helpful comment and i appreciate that.

Sometimes i write two versions of the poem and in this case i think i will as i can conclude with others what is best to do for the poem.

Dovina mentioned the last line which is pivotal though perhaps preachy as it leads to what the title and act does - it leads to nothing.

thanks for your comments you and dovina often support me and its good of u both.