poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Goliath by amanda_dcosta.

Ranger1 Jul 2006

Good questions, excellent take on Goliath. It's pretty ironic that the laziness fights so much...I think of it more like a dead weight against which we struggle. The only thing I'd really change here is removing the exclamation mark at the end...they rarely appeal to me in poetry. Others may, of course, disagree.