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ReplyTo a comment on weather poem part 9: song for gloria by nypoet22.

Dovina10 Sep 2006

I wonder why you present these parts from the last, working toward the first, and why they are written in different styles, united as you say, by the theme of weather. All of them, up to this point, have some good lines, but I believe I'd do better in following your theme if the intro part were given first.