Ranger19 Sep 2006

Argh! The curse of the "'n" strikes again! I know, I know, I'm a Queen's English snob, I'll get over it one day...
Anyway, I quite liked the story but struggled to get the beat to it. ecargo's better at this than me, but I do think it wants reworking, or maybe just reclassifying. Done as prose it would seem very akin to the monologue introduction to a character story (does need to be spoken though). Decent enough, let me know if you do any edits of this; I'd be interested to read :-)