poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Dovina Memorial Bike Lane by Dovina.

nypoet2224 Sep 2006

damn right! if i were you i'd rework the line breaks to emphasize more verbs. "abused" is buried in the middle of a line when it needed to be front and center. i think you captured here something we all sometimes wish we could do: pull all the politicians out of their chairs, shake them violently and talk some sense, dammit!