drnick28 Sep 2006

I really like it up until the insect-line, I'm not sure where you're going from there on. I like "in clicking like an oaken farmhouse door" and "as solar flowers threw their manes around
with total disregard; the screaming slaves
in chain-gang rows." very good descriptions. At the same time, I know you can write much more vivdly. So fucking do it.