poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival) by Ranger.

Ranger30 Sep 2006

I think you're right; I still don't quite know what I want to say in here. I know I mean something, I'm just hoping that as this evolves it'll become clear (so much for poetic certainty...). Ominous is the idea - the first stanza lets it down most, although the last stanza is meant to be a little lighter. Maybe I could get away with some blustery language, it is about storm and wind after all (yes okay, you can kill me later ;-) )