poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Mandarin by Caducus.

INTRANSIT12 Oct 2006

Line one delete- to me and insert 2 dashes
same for line four (I wrote her) can go for two dashes.
Drop (noticing), drop laid,drop yet,drop and.

There's still something missing from the parts dealing with your father. Can't pinpoint it yet. Good to see you still plugging away. Fuckin' rough aint it?