Ranger13 Oct 2006

Indeed I did think it'd go down well with you. I had to post something (I am killing myself over two other poems which resist all attempts to be written). I'll look at the edit for that line, although it'll mean playing with the iambs - but hell, if it works...
I actually love titles almost as much as the poetry itself; this one was just for the drafting so it's bound to change in the future.