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ReplyTo a comment on The Day Habeas Corpus Died by Wakeboarder20.

howl24 Oct 2006

I don't know why you argue that this poem has any subtlety. It doesn't. On the plus side it isn't too shoddy. I dont like the 'not as good as tv reality' line. I think it would work better if the narrator were watching something specific.