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ReplyTo a comment on Stripping the willow by ecargo.

Dovina17 Jan 2007

“Pound your swords into plowshares,” your spears into sickles, which do burn more naturally in the hands.
Strange, using the British spelling of plow.
Suggest “murmuring” replace the obscure “sough.”
Suggest conventional sentence structure in the last one, as done in the others.