Paul S19 Jan 2007

Wow! And you said I was wordy. Only kidding Dovina--this is very good work. Strong metaphors and similes push it along nicely. I have to admit that I'm a sucker for poems about nature and this is one of the best I've seen on this site. It is also a poem about home. I've never been to Tennessee, but the picture you paint reminds me of my own home in New Hampshire. Thanks for sharing.