half.italian24 Feb 2007

I guess I didn't like some of your comments toward other posters. Maybe I was drunk that night as well. Anyway, I'm done with that, and I still don't like the poem very much. There's no form, there's no point to it, and it's just not fun to read. Find a 'poetic' approach to saying what you want to say. Rhyming, even poorly, does not equal poetry. By the way, 'er, &, 'n, lookin', livin' goin', prayin', etc, are not words. They might be excusable if the poem was meant for song lyrics. This obviously isn't. That's my three pennies. I've seen much better from you.